I'm trying to write one thing every month as practice; let's hope I won't give up on that
Most of my writings I no longer keep, but I dug up some old snippets just now. I have never done 3rd person omniscient. It's always been either 1st or limited 3rd...
Hmmm I find it easier to nail the story to a specific perspective
Most of my writings I no longer keep, but I dug up some old snippets just now. I have never done 3rd person omniscient. It's always been either 1st or limited 3rd...
Hmmm I find it easier to nail the story to a specific perspective
:)))))))))))))))
:)))))))))))))))
The translation I took on Reddit, but I couldn't find that post anymore...
The translation I took on Reddit, but I couldn't find that post anymore...
//Personally, I'm more for analog. I like the flexibility & the feeling of pencil scratching against paper, as opposed to rigid lines & spaces & fonts.
But I'm terribly indecisive & slow, going back and forth on the words and ideas, so everything looks super messy.....
//Personally, I'm more for analog. I like the flexibility & the feeling of pencil scratching against paper, as opposed to rigid lines & spaces & fonts.
But I'm terribly indecisive & slow, going back and forth on the words and ideas, so everything looks super messy.....
There r meticulous details about what Byleth does, what the children study, what his friends are working on, the food they ate, the topics they discussed, the games they played
But nothing ab himself, like an utterly detached record
There r meticulous details about what Byleth does, what the children study, what his friends are working on, the food they ate, the topics they discussed, the games they played
But nothing ab himself, like an utterly detached record
And Zelda...has 4 decades of other games I can play
And Zelda...has 4 decades of other games I can play
He's not my lord but I believe he'd welcome a little whimsy from heaven :)))
He's not my lord but I believe he'd welcome a little whimsy from heaven :)))
He looks so extremely bald without it Jesus Christ
He looks so extremely bald without it Jesus Christ
- fdimileth
- probably ooc
Idk I just thought it would be nice to do small plotless snippets. Byleth is cat-coded
- fdimileth
- probably ooc
Idk I just thought it would be nice to do small plotless snippets. Byleth is cat-coded
It seemed fine during proofreading, but clearly the first section goes in and out waaay too fast, almost breakneck pace
It's just dialogues and dialogues and dialogues without any thought or description to let the atmosphere sink in...
Đcm .-.
It seemed fine during proofreading, but clearly the first section goes in and out waaay too fast, almost breakneck pace
It's just dialogues and dialogues and dialogues without any thought or description to let the atmosphere sink in...
Đcm .-.
'Memory' is so important to Azure Moon—ppl are motivated by it, molded by it, and haunted by it...
Especially Dimi whose delusions were not only fueled by anger & grief but also the fear of forgetting
What is left of the man once you take that away?
'Memory' is so important to Azure Moon—ppl are motivated by it, molded by it, and haunted by it...
Especially Dimi whose delusions were not only fueled by anger & grief but also the fear of forgetting
What is left of the man once you take that away?
Dimitri & Felix's support shows why I don't like the writing in 3Hopes...
What's supposed to be an emotional convo ab moving on while holding memories in your heart is rushed & condensed into "repress your repressed problems better" wo the context of everything that happened in AM
Dimitri & Felix's support shows why I don't like the writing in 3Hopes...
What's supposed to be an emotional convo ab moving on while holding memories in your heart is rushed & condensed into "repress your repressed problems better" wo the context of everything that happened in AM
I do like the idea a lot, even if it's a little ooc
But it was so taxing to imagine the scene playing out...
I do like the idea a lot, even if it's a little ooc
But it was so taxing to imagine the scene playing out...
But post fusing w Sothis she started to grow Draconic features but it's really uncomfortable & she slept a lot (she's always been half dragon from Sitris Nabatean blood but that part had been dormant). Dimi took care of her cuz "house leader's duty" 😋
But post fusing w Sothis she started to grow Draconic features but it's really uncomfortable & she slept a lot (she's always been half dragon from Sitris Nabatean blood but that part had been dormant). Dimi took care of her cuz "house leader's duty" 😋
I need Bylie to give him good scratches so bad...
I need Bylie to give him good scratches so bad...
Like jumping in to take a perfectly avoidable hit for him :))))))))
Like jumping in to take a perfectly avoidable hit for him :))))))))
The reason I had dimileth dancing in the middle of talking ab their feelings was bc of how brain-altering Rabbit-Leopard was for me 🙃
These two were not even in a rela here btw, they are just glued tgt like that 🫶
The reason I had dimileth dancing in the middle of talking ab their feelings was bc of how brain-altering Rabbit-Leopard was for me 🙃
These two were not even in a rela here btw, they are just glued tgt like that 🫶
Originally I wanted to finish this for September, but rereading this again in don't know how to continue
There's no plot just all feels...
Originally I wanted to finish this for September, but rereading this again in don't know how to continue
There's no plot just all feels...