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Filter words have their place. You lose an element of voice if you press yourself to get rid of every last one of them. Same with adverbs. Same with telling rather than showing.
Filter words have their place. You lose an element of voice if you press yourself to get rid of every last one of them. Same with adverbs. Same with telling rather than showing.
The young grey-brown wolfhound rounded the corner of the wall, leaping over the crumbling masonry at its foot, bounding after the laughing boy whose fine brown hair bounced with every leap.
Bonus: Make one sentence from your propositions
The young grey-brown wolfhound rounded the corner of the wall, leaping over the crumbling masonry at its foot, bounding after the laughing boy whose fine brown hair bounced with every leap.
There's something about Sarah and the way she styles her hair - not that she'd be particularly happy about you focusing on her hair, or any other physical quality, since she considers any judgement of a woman's exterior to be a sign of misogyny in the viewer.
There's something about Sarah and the way she styles her hair - not that she'd be particularly happy about you focusing on her hair, or any other physical quality, since she considers any judgement of a woman's exterior to be a sign of misogyny in the viewer.
#Prosetober
The modifying phrases can go before or after or both, but if you're doing this strictly (you don't have to!) they should only modify the base clause
#Prosetober
⛵️ The boat sailed jauntily over the choppy waves.
🥕 The chef chopped the carrots into fine batons.
👑 Her Majesty was not pretty, and never had been; rather, she was handsome in her advanced age, having grown into her strong jaw and nose.
⛵️ The boat sailed jauntily over the choppy waves.
🥕 The chef chopped the carrots into fine batons.
👑 Her Majesty was not pretty, and never had been; rather, she was handsome in her advanced age, having grown into her strong jaw and nose.
The servants, dressed in their pink and green silk livery, blue and silver phoenix embroidered large on the chest, heels clipping the marble floor in choreographed synchronicity, placed the feast on the table: long sticks of bread fresh from the oven, twisted evenly and gleaming with
🧵
If you're following the trail Prosetober trail, the challenge is to only use coordinating and subordinating modifiers (no conjunctions) but all chonky sentences will do!
The servants, dressed in their pink and green silk livery, blue and silver phoenix embroidered large on the chest, heels clipping the marble floor in choreographed synchronicity, placed the feast on the table: long sticks of bread fresh from the oven, twisted evenly and gleaming with
🧵
🛒 Beverly noticed Miranda, when really she should have been noticing how her shopping cart was about to scrape into the Honda Civic next to her parked Nissan.
♒️ The ocean, which was red on this planet, roiled.
🤺 Eduardo, blade at the ready, sprung into action.
The difference from Day 3 (coordinate) is that here we are drilling down, finding more specifics for the reader's mind, becoming more focused on what the writer is focused on, thinking on the precise point that they are making.
🛒 Beverly noticed Miranda, when really she should have been noticing how her shopping cart was about to scrape into the Honda Civic next to her parked Nissan.
♒️ The ocean, which was red on this planet, roiled.
🤺 Eduardo, blade at the ready, sprung into action.
Can't help but string them all together into a little story this time 😝
The witch cackled, her head going back with the sound, wild and unfettered. Lawrence steadied himself against the table, the fact finally hitting him: he'd drunk rather more than he'd intended to, and perhaps,
🧵
The modifying phrases can go before or after or both, but if you're doing this strictly (you don't have to!) they should only modify the base clause
Can't help but string them all together into a little story this time 😝
The witch cackled, her head going back with the sound, wild and unfettered. Lawrence steadied himself against the table, the fact finally hitting him: he'd drunk rather more than he'd intended to, and perhaps,
🧵
My computer blue-screened, derailing #Prosetober and everything else I was using it for
My computer blue-screened, derailing #Prosetober and everything else I was using it for
You can, of course, hop on them like an early release or wait for the next day if you're in another time zone
You can, of course, hop on them like an early release or wait for the next day if you're in another time zone
If you're following the trail Prosetober trail, the challenge is to only use coordinating and subordinating modifiers (no conjunctions) but all chonky sentences will do!
If you're following the trail Prosetober trail, the challenge is to only use coordinating and subordinating modifiers (no conjunctions) but all chonky sentences will do!
Bonus: Make one sentence from your propositions
Bonus: Make one sentence from your propositions
The difference from Day 3 (coordinate) is that here we are drilling down, finding more specifics for the reader's mind, becoming more focused on what the writer is focused on, thinking on the precise point that they are making.
The difference from Day 3 (coordinate) is that here we are drilling down, finding more specifics for the reader's mind, becoming more focused on what the writer is focused on, thinking on the precise point that they are making.
The modifying phrases can go before or after or both, but if you're doing this strictly (you don't have to!) they should only modify the base clause
The modifying phrases can go before or after or both, but if you're doing this strictly (you don't have to!) they should only modify the base clause
Another tool you doubtless reach for without too much thought, but it can give your writing a real sense of forward motion, accomplishment, or conclusion when you take the time to consider its uses
Another tool you doubtless reach for without too much thought, but it can give your writing a real sense of forward motion, accomplishment, or conclusion when you take the time to consider its uses