bye
I
fly

#3wordspoet 😉

#scifaikusaturday #imago #fly
#vsspoem #movie #thefly #mothman *
#invertefest #mothfest
#fantaiku #scifaiku #sff
#bspp23 #haiku #senryusunday
#blueskyrelay #soul #vssmagic #wonder
#2wordprompt #superheroine
#inkmine #escapade
#whistpr #flutter #antiheroine

🦸🏻‍♂️will be back!

daytime dance party
the sky & you
full of blue notes

#haiku #poetry #micropoetry
#2wordprompt #music #inkmine #blue
#note #haikufeel #notes
#blueskyrelay #soul #blues
#dailyhaikuprompt #melody
#sky #senryu #senryusunday #hbp142
#fantaiku #scifaiku #sff #bspp23
#moonmystic #colours of the #morning

Are we small,
A hurry of inconsequence,
Or do we sometimes shine,
Remnants of stars,
Stranded,
Forlorn and scattered,
Grey shapes beneath the blue.
Leaves that have fallen,
Now staring up at the sky.

#Bspp23 through the eyes of the sky

may 2nd
the unemployed dreams
go on

#may2nd is the #day of the #unemployed

#haiku #poetry #micropoetry #senryu
#senryusunday #vss365 #dream #hbp148
#moonmystic #colourmydreams #bspp23
#scifaikusaturday #scifaiku #fantaiku #sff
#no #job #blueskyrelay #change #earth
#2wordprompt #describe #union !

the earth sang
through the eyes of the sky
of honeyed dawn
mellifluously
caught
in strings
of
a
thrush’s throat

#BlueskyPoetry #BSPP23
#vsspic

#blueskypoets
#poetrycommunity #poems
#poetry #writingcommunity

zweiter mai
der arbeitlose verträumt
seinen kampftag

#may2nd is the #day of the #unemployed

#haiku #poetry #micropoetry #senryu
#senryusunday #vss365 #dream
#moonmystic #colourmydreams #bspp23
#scifaikusaturday #scifaiku #fantaiku #sff
#blueskyrelay #change #earth
#2wordprompt #describe #union !

"Through the Eyes of the Sky"
Eyes that endlessly rain tears,
He sees what they've done to her,
Body battered, abuse of years,
Poisoned, scorched, burned further,
Her canopies of rooftop trees,
Largest whales, smallest fleas,
All sullied, coated in madness,
Eyes of sky know only sadness. #BSPP23

Today's #BlueSkyPoetry Prompt (BSPP)

Title:
“Through the Eyes of the Sky”

Write about the perspective of the sky watching over the earth below.

Please be kind! Have fun!

Use the hashtag #BSPP23 to share your creation!

Two very different poems. I didn't find the first pessimistic. First drafts can be closer to the edge of an abyss and thus hold more truth. May i ask is #BSPP23 a writing prompt? Not that i need anymore...

Yesterday evening, I wrote a poem for #BSPP23 "through the eyes of the sky". Reading it back, I found it a bit too pessimistic. So I wrote another one, trying to make it more positive. Here are both for your critical examination.