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naturalambigram.bsky.social
Here’s my #DialogueDrop for #CampRevPit!

This dialogue captures the MC’s paranoia and hints at what’s to come... It’s also just a fun conversation between two friends. Man, I love these two together.
#CRPFantasyFoxes
“So, what, you’re saying it’s all my imagination?” I said. Helena pinched her thumb and forefinger together. “Maybe a little. You do get carried away when a thought gets stuck in your head. Like that mysterious red head you claim is following you.” “But I am being followed!” “Oh yeah? Then where is he now?” “He’s not doing it all the time.” “Uhuh. Isn’t that convenient.” “I’m serious! First the conference, now my street. And he’s not just watching. I think he’s trying to kill me.”
April 25, 2026 at 10:03 AM
authorkatecooper.bsky.social
“Fine. Run away again. It’s what you’re good at.”

#DialogueDrop #CampRevPit #CRPSirens
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 25, 2026 at 1:34 AM
lnloft.bsky.social
#CampRevPit Took me a while to decide what dialogue to share, because there's a lot that I like, but I decided on this. It's a little bit funny, a little bit sad, and overall very Rin.
#DialogueDrop #JustStabsWIP
“You want to keep going to the Source?” Rin reached into her jacket and pulled out a knife. She used the tip to clean out under her fingernails. “Well, I don’t think I want to, exactly. But, you know, I’m already here, so if I went home now there’d be absolutely no point to the last few days. And I still need to get back at Djarah for kidnapping me—” “Did crashing the airship not count?” “No, it did not. Plus, that’s a lot of money Djarah’s paying, so I’m sure I could find some use for it. And, anyway, I’m still trying to work my way into Leanora’s favor, ‘cause you’ve always gotta hope, so…” Rin lightly pressed the tip of her knife against her palm, spinning it around without looking at Rosebird. “Well, I suppose those reasons are at least as good as Gorian’s,” Rosebird said. “What are his reasons?” “He wants to get really rich.” “Fair.” Rin looked up. “Don’t go thinking this means I like you all or anything. It’s just, you know, the practicalities of coming—that’s all.” Rosebird was examining her face. Rin quickly looked down, at the knife in her hands. She hefted it by the hilt. “How often do you tell the truth?” Rosebird asked. Rin shrugged. “Just enough to keep it interesting.”
April 25, 2026 at 12:33 AM
michelleogilvy.bsky.social
Not quite a bingo for Fine Means Stop Asking. Lucy's a little too anxious and introverted to be a 'sunshine'. Her mother sure thinks that some forced proximity will do her good, though. Will it? 🤔

#CRPBeemine #CRPSirens #CampRevPit #DialogueDrop
Bingo card with the following options marked off: forced proximity, slowburn, found family and friends to lovers Snippet of writing as follows: “Forced proximity is a well-known ignition for romance,” her mother said, her tone musing now rather than concerned. “You might find some surprises this year.” Lucy frowned. Proximity to who? “I’m not Will’s type,” she said. “And you know that Robin is ace, right?” “Is he? Well, I wasn’t talking about him.” Lucy squinted at her mother. That only left… “Oh my god,” she said. “Is that why you’ve been leaving LGBTQIA+ pamphlets on my bed? You think I have a thing for Jaime?” No. No. No. Lucy thought she had kept her crush hidden so deep that it was unnoticeable. It was supposed to be unnoticeable. It needed to be.
April 24, 2026 at 11:47 PM
sarasafaas.bsky.social
#camprevpit #crpdryads #dialoguedrop
April 24, 2026 at 10:57 PM
seeclarkewrite.bsky.social
When the mark becomes something else entirely....#CampRevPit #DialogueDrop #CRPBeeMine
April 24, 2026 at 10:44 PM
salazar-ro.bsky.social
Finding these two's voices has been so fun!

#DialogueDrop #CampRevPit #CRPnessie
April 24, 2026 at 10:21 PM
sofiaglass.bsky.social
#CampRevPit here's my #DialogueDrop! This is basically the dynamic you can expect from my MCs😄
"You really think I'd drink venom?" “I don’t know. People do; I didn’t want to take the risk.” “People? Who would—” “Nevermind. Just be careful.” I couldn’t help but smile. “Are you worried about me, Stabby?” I relished the look of irritation in his eyes, the way the muscles in his face tensed and I knew he was biting his tongue. “Well, don’t be.” I patted his cheek and he looked at me with murder in his eyes; my smile broadened. “I have killed plenty of faeries; I know what I’m doing.”
April 24, 2026 at 9:29 PM
purplewillow2223.bsky.social
#camprevpit #dialoguedrop #q
When a stalled-out artist turns to her Wiccan mother for direction, she accidentally conjures the ghost from her childhood—whose meddling lands her in a romance with a heart transplant survivor.
Ro-Mantic Intentions is an 81k word Romcom with a paranormal twist.
April 24, 2026 at 9:18 PM
rhywrites.bsky.social
“I miss you. Is that ridiculous?” I watch through his eyes as he looks for movement in the trees. “It is. Our minds are literally enmeshed and it’s still not enough.”

I blush and cross my ankles, cringing at the dozen of things I want to say back, knowing he’s hearing all of them.

#DialogueDrop
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 8:30 PM
prahajess.bsky.social
#CampRevPit #CRPSirens #DialogueDrop

Sort of sums up the tone of this book.
Mika has an idea. “But first, I need to know two things. Number one: I think we should definitely stay up all night. Can you commit?” He smiles; either he thinks this was obvious, or he likes the idea. “I told you, I take drug buddy-ship very seriously. Consider me committed.”
April 24, 2026 at 7:56 PM
knturner-author.bsky.social
“You two obviously still have feelings for one another.”
“Yes, hate.” ❤️‍🔥

#DialogueDrop #CampRevPit #CRPSparkleSkunks
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 7:33 PM
catherinewinters.com
#CampRevPit Day 5: #DialogueDrop
TFW you just realized a program running for the past several decades on a long-dead secret society's array of mechanical calculation engines will finish at midnight on New Year's Eve, and some clockwork asshole you found in a box is being a jerk about it. #CRPDryads
“Perhaps you should spend more time thinking about why this calculation finishes in five days,” the doll said, its unmoving porcelain lips dripping with condescension. “Why not six? Why not eight hundred?” “What are you on about?” Iresh asked. “It’s the Convergence.” “The ‘Convergence’,” the doll said mockingly. “What would that matter to the universe? It’s a new moon, that’s all.” “It’s the new year!” Nia protested. “In both calendars!” Caz said. “New year?” the doll scoffed. “There’s no such thing.” “There is though,” Iresh said. “Oh, well argued,” the doll said. The man scowled. “They’re numbers on a chart,” the doll continued. “They’re not even important holidays to you. It’s not as if it’s your Goddess’s birthday.” “The Goddess doesn’t have a birthday!” Caz sputtered. “I suppose you’d know,” the doll said. Caz glared at the doll.
April 24, 2026 at 7:21 PM
jennleefrances.bsky.social
"I never claimed to be innocent."

"Me neither, kid." Nina says with a wicked grin like she's amused by my admission.

We confess our sins with smiles....

A snippet of a conversation between Simone & Cousin Nina
(also known as The East River Wraith)

#CRPNightcrawlers #camprevpit #dialoguedrop
Image of two girls, one is a ghost, against a backdrop of water. Dialogue: "I never claimed to be innocent." "Me neither, kid." Nina says with a wicked grin like she's amused by my admission. She always did like me better when I was being bad too. We confess our sins with smiles. (Simone & Cousin Nina (also known as The East River Wraith) in The Truth of Fear. A YA Feminist Horror Novel.
April 24, 2026 at 7:15 PM
snackswrites.bsky.social
#dialoguedrop
April 24, 2026 at 6:04 PM
galenbunting.bsky.social
February speaks up. “Can I get vanilla, strawberry, Oreo, and uh, blue raspberry slush, all in a shake?”
Christophe stares at February in morbid fascination. “That’s going to taste like a bunch of nothing. Those are some trash flavor combinations.” #dialoguedrop #camprevpit #crplyrebirds
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 5:57 PM
hlschiffwriting.bsky.social
Dialogue exchange between two tense characters:

“I didn’t find it funny.”
“You weren’t supposed to.”
“Your *friend* wrote you a letter.”
“Where is it?”
A pause.
“Aren’t you going to thank me?”
“I wouldn’t thank a dog that fetched me a goose. Why would I thank you?”

#CRPFantasyFoxes #DialogueDrop
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 5:33 PM
snailpails.bsky.social
I think this captures MC really well, and I just had fun with dialogue attribution here. 🥹

#CampRevPit #DialogueDrop #CRPDryads
“Marcus?” His mind snaps back to the present. There’s a frown on his boyfriend’s face. All too familiar disappointment. “Yes, Darry?” he asks, sweetly, like his syrupy tone can sweeten whatever this shit is. “Are you still interested… in… us?” “Of course—” “Then why does this,” Daryl gestures at them, their relationship, “feel like this?” It’s the same conversation, the same script. “I mean, like, the honeymoon stage doesn’t last forever, right?” Marcus says. He can recite it with his eyes closed. Next, Daryl is going to say: “This isn’t just the end of the honeymoon.” To which Marcus replies: “So what is it? You want to break up?” Then, they insist: “No, no, no, that’s not what I meant—” It’s so frustrating. How do they always tell he’s losing interest? Do his eyes get too glassy?
April 24, 2026 at 5:26 PM
authorjbecker.bsky.social
"I hold my grudges like you hold your Pride."

A short one but it captures my MC and the love interest quite well 😄🔥
#camprevpit #crpsparkleskunks #dialoguedrop
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 24
Good morning, #CampRevPit! 🏕️ Today's prompt is #DialogueDrop. Share a snippet of dialogue that captures the essence of your story or MC, or maybe just a bit that makes you laugh.
A well-fed green caterpillar sits on a little hill to the right of the screen, eating a pile of pages labeled with the words “story notes.” On the left, a Camp RevPit flag waves at the end of a flagpole. There is a blue sky with fluffy white clouds in the background. The following text is on the picture: Day 5: #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 5:15 PM
jules.northsky.social
This was something from this week that really showed a fun relationship dynamic that's grown a lot in this new draft:

#camprevpit #dialoguedrop #CRPShrikes
Every once in a while, everything aligned and the store was busy from opening to close. The three of them were constantly moving: helping customers, restocking shelves, cleaning up messes. "You should sit down," Mallack said to Ania as he rehung a collection of shirts that a customer had tried on earlier. Ania, across the rack from him, said, "I'm fine." He didn't look at her, focusing on putting the shirts back with others of the same size. "Mm hm. That hip you're favoring would argue the point." Ania looked up at him with exasperation. "There's too much to do." She gestured with her chin toward a new customer coming through the door. "I'll be fine." Mallack looked up, one eye narrowing. "That's different than 'I'm fine'." "Sun warm me, I wish I had something to throw at you right now," Ania said under her breath as she moved deliberately toward the door to greet the newcomer. Her hip was throbbing, but she certainly wasn't going to give Mallack the pleasure of seeing her limp.
April 24, 2026 at 4:18 PM
josephineanstey.bsky.social
#camprevpit #crpfireflies #dialoguedrop
April 24, 2026 at 4:11 PM
pixielauren.bsky.social
Here's a snip of dialogue that tells you a lot about my narrator, and about some of the themes in my book:

#CampRevPit #CRPBeeMine #DialogueDrop
Quoted dialogue from my manuscript: "The driver -- Steve, according to the plastic name tag pinned to his shirt -- gestured for me to hand him my bags. I steered my carry-on toward him, and he lifted it into the trunk. I kept hold of my backpack. “This all you got?” he asked. “Uh huh.” I was tired and disinterested in conversation, or maybe I was trying to act like I rode in private sedans all the time. “Usually, ladies bring every outfit they own. You know, just in case.” He winked at me. “It’s too early in the day for misogyny, Steve,” I said. “What?” “Oh – nothing, Steve.” As an academic – former academic, I thought with a wince – I was practiced at the script of the righteous feminist, but I could barely go through the motions any more. Especially now. What was the point? I knew how the world worked, which means I knew that actually, feminism was pretty fucking useless, just a cudgel I could pretend would make Steve feel bad – that is, if he had heard my remark, or if I were brave enough to repeat it.
April 24, 2026 at 4:10 PM
moby94.bsky.social
Any bit of dialogue with my MC’s grandfather is so much fun to write. Just because he’s a mean, complex character. This one is between him and my MC:
#CampRevPit #CRPDryads #DialogueDrop
April 24, 2026 at 3:57 PM
emilyshete.bsky.social
A mix of hope and anger leads to the following conversation.
#DialogueDrop #Camprevpit #crplyrebirds
"I propose right before we evacuate we each punch our least favorite wall on this floor. So pick your wall and claim it now. I want the one right by the doors." Mya sat back in her chair. Bethany looked around. "I want right outside room two in the neonatal unit. That room is cursed." Vivica slowly settled into her seat. "I'll choose. I'm not sure yet." She scanned the room. "So what's the plan for tomorrow?"
April 24, 2026 at 3:33 PM
rockwlrs.bsky.social
Zephyr has just discovered that her best friend has a little teeny tiny big secret that they're in a time loop and he's the only one who knows it. Oh, and he can time travel at will.

#camprevpit #dialoguedrop #CRPSugarGliders
Then she said, “Don't you get bored living the same day over and over?” I was like, “No. It's pretty comfy. I know exactly what to expect.” After thinking for a bit I added, “If I ever did get bored I guess I could always take a vacation for a day or two to some time when, uh, when we're taking a vacation somewhere. But then I'd come back to today.” She got quiet and said, “Hey, you could commit crimes and never get caught with that ability, you know. If someone seems like they're getting close, you just jump back in time to when you were safe.” “Well, yeah, I guess, but why would I want to?” was my response. She said back, “There isn't even someone at school you want to play a prank on?” I shrugged my shoulders and said, “Not really.” Then she said, “Hey, does this make you immortal? If you die can you go back in time to when you were alive?” I had to tell her, “I don't know. I don't think so. I don't think it's a good idea to try to find out.” Her eyes got big. “Oh, I guess you're right about that.”
April 24, 2026 at 3:17 PM