River Hill: Part 1
Every #Southern town worth its salt has a ghost story. Will this be one? You’ll decide. Follow the story of Sarah, Rose, and Marcus.
This #story was originally written on Twitter in 2019, and I'm recreating it here with minor changes.
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Every #Southern town worth its salt has a ghost story. Will this be one? You’ll decide. Follow the story of Sarah, Rose, and Marcus.
This #story was originally written on Twitter in 2019, and I'm recreating it here with minor changes.
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January 12, 2025 at 1:53 AM
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January 14, 2025 at 2:33 AM
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January 15, 2025 at 3:04 AM
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She actually had met a boy, but not a boyfriend. It was in September. School had started weeks ago, but the temps weren’t getting cooler yet. She was under the old bridge, when she thought she saw a head in the water. It was dusk, the guy was Black, so it was hard to tell.
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January 14, 2025 at 12:36 AM
She actually had met a boy, but not a boyfriend. It was in September. School had started weeks ago, but the temps weren’t getting cooler yet. She was under the old bridge, when she thought she saw a head in the water. It was dusk, the guy was Black, so it was hard to tell.
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This is the end of Part 1. If you haven’t met Sarah Shepherd yet, read the whole conversation. To learn more about Sarah’s story and what happens with Marcus, continue on Google Maps, River Hill, Part 2.
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This is Part 3 of a story. Read to find out where the story continues or go back and read Part 1 on Twitter. https://twitter.com/kdunkelberg/status/1185396123239931904
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January 15, 2025 at 9:17 PM
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Many say Mary is the ghost of River Hill. Most who tell her story or one of the many versions of it that are passed around in local lore, do not know her full name or her full story. If you are one of those, start with River Hill, Part 1.
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January 15, 2025 at 2:35 PM
Many say Mary is the ghost of River Hill. Most who tell her story or one of the many versions of it that are passed around in local lore, do not know her full name or her full story. If you are one of those, start with River Hill, Part 1.
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January 15, 2025 at 3:03 AM
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January 15, 2025 at 3:01 AM
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January 15, 2025 at 2:50 AM
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Her friends from home stopped messaging her once school started and their lives got back to normal. She didn’t even want to make friends with the girls at her new school. They were so superficial and cliquish. She didn’t know what this Marcus kid wanted, but she was bored.
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January 15, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Her friends from home stopped messaging her once school started and their lives got back to normal. She didn’t even want to make friends with the girls at her new school. They were so superficial and cliquish. She didn’t know what this Marcus kid wanted, but she was bored.
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Sarah thought she knew which tree the kid was talking about, and she thought it was kind of cute he’d sent her a note and not a text or Snap, but then no one knew how to connect with her here.
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January 15, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Sarah thought she knew which tree the kid was talking about, and she thought it was kind of cute he’d sent her a note and not a text or Snap, but then no one knew how to connect with her here.
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She crammed it in her backpack so she wouldn’t get in trouble, but when she unfolded it later she saw there was a note: “Priscilla—You probably hate me or think I’m a creep. I’m not dangerous or anything. Promise. Meet me at the tree across the wooden bridge. 7:30. Marcus”
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January 14, 2025 at 9:57 PM
She crammed it in her backpack so she wouldn’t get in trouble, but when she unfolded it later she saw there was a note: “Priscilla—You probably hate me or think I’m a creep. I’m not dangerous or anything. Promise. Meet me at the tree across the wooden bridge. 7:30. Marcus”
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The next day, she hung around by her locker long enough that she was almost late to Math. She was hoping to avoid the kid that way. But when she sat in her chair, she noticed a piece of notebook paper folded up like a clumsy attempt at an origami frog.
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January 14, 2025 at 8:48 PM
The next day, she hung around by her locker long enough that she was almost late to Math. She was hoping to avoid the kid that way. But when she sat in her chair, she noticed a piece of notebook paper folded up like a clumsy attempt at an origami frog.
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But one day in the hall between fourth and fifth periods, she heard a familiar voice call out “Priscilla, wait up!” She didn’t have to look to know who it was, but fortunately Math class was right there. She dashed in and slipped into her desk, keeping her head down.
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January 14, 2025 at 7:00 PM
But one day in the hall between fourth and fifth periods, she heard a familiar voice call out “Priscilla, wait up!” She didn’t have to look to know who it was, but fortunately Math class was right there. She dashed in and slipped into her desk, keeping her head down.
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After this, she started wearing dark lipstick and eye liner, which she applied in the restroom at school so her mother wouldn’t know. She just wanted everyone to leave her alone so she could make it through her last years of high school unnoticed and escape to Mizzou.
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January 14, 2025 at 4:59 PM
After this, she started wearing dark lipstick and eye liner, which she applied in the restroom at school so her mother wouldn’t know. She just wanted everyone to leave her alone so she could make it through her last years of high school unnoticed and escape to Mizzou.
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There were worse things than talking to a guy from school who was crazy enough to swim in the Tombigbee river where there were probably leeches and catfish and god knows what brain eating bacteria. Back in St. Louis she had friends with swimming pools. Here life was nuts.
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January 14, 2025 at 4:14 PM
There were worse things than talking to a guy from school who was crazy enough to swim in the Tombigbee river where there were probably leeches and catfish and god knows what brain eating bacteria. Back in St. Louis she had friends with swimming pools. Here life was nuts.
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As she reached the gravel parking lot, she heard the sound of water sloshing and knew he was getting out. She sped up but stumbled.
“Have a nice trip, Priscilla!” she heard him yell.
“That’s not my name!” she shouted back.
“Whatever! Miss Priss!”
He was laughing.
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“Have a nice trip, Priscilla!” she heard him yell.
“That’s not my name!” she shouted back.
“Whatever! Miss Priss!”
He was laughing.
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January 14, 2025 at 3:55 AM
As she reached the gravel parking lot, she heard the sound of water sloshing and knew he was getting out. She sped up but stumbled.
“Have a nice trip, Priscilla!” she heard him yell.
“That’s not my name!” she shouted back.
“Whatever! Miss Priss!”
He was laughing.
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“Have a nice trip, Priscilla!” she heard him yell.
“That’s not my name!” she shouted back.
“Whatever! Miss Priss!”
He was laughing.
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She couldn’t believe she’d been drawn into even a brief conversation with this kid. She guessed she’d been staring at him, but he was pretty brash to talk to her that way. It was creepy. On the other hand, it was kind of nice compared to how the other kids ignored her.
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January 14, 2025 at 3:17 AM
She couldn’t believe she’d been drawn into even a brief conversation with this kid. She guessed she’d been staring at him, but he was pretty brash to talk to her that way. It was creepy. On the other hand, it was kind of nice compared to how the other kids ignored her.
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“I don’t have a suit!” she shouted as if they were having a logical conversation. He dog paddled about ten yards from one of the bridge pylons.
“Me neither!” he laughed, then shouted “I’m wearing running shorts!” when she turned her back.
She laughed but kept walking.
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“Me neither!” he laughed, then shouted “I’m wearing running shorts!” when she turned her back.
She laughed but kept walking.
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January 14, 2025 at 2:45 AM
“I don’t have a suit!” she shouted as if they were having a logical conversation. He dog paddled about ten yards from one of the bridge pylons.
“Me neither!” he laughed, then shouted “I’m wearing running shorts!” when she turned her back.
She laughed but kept walking.
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“Me neither!” he laughed, then shouted “I’m wearing running shorts!” when she turned her back.
She laughed but kept walking.
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“Hell, nah,” he yelled back. “That sign’s for sissies and tourists! Which are you?”
“Neither, fortunately, but that river smells nasty. How can you swim in it?”
“Just ran five miles. I don’t care,” he yelled back. “Feels good! Come on in! You can shower later.”
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“Neither, fortunately, but that river smells nasty. How can you swim in it?”
“Just ran five miles. I don’t care,” he yelled back. “Feels good! Come on in! You can shower later.”
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January 14, 2025 at 2:36 AM
As he swam closer, she thought she recognized the kid from math class, so when he yelled out that she should come in, she just laughed and yelled back, "Are you crazy? Isn’t it dangerous?” Right where she was standing, there was a red sign that warned of “Swift Current.”
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January 14, 2025 at 2:30 AM
As he swam closer, she thought she recognized the kid from math class, so when he yelled out that she should come in, she just laughed and yelled back, "Are you crazy? Isn’t it dangerous?” Right where she was standing, there was a red sign that warned of “Swift Current.”
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When her dad jokingly said she was meeting her “boyfriend," she just rolled her eyes like he was being crazy. But really, she didn’t mind if he believed it. She just didn’t want them to worry about her and she didn’t want them prying into what she was doing at night.
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January 13, 2025 at 11:08 PM
When her dad jokingly said she was meeting her “boyfriend," she just rolled her eyes like he was being crazy. But really, she didn’t mind if he believed it. She just didn’t want them to worry about her and she didn’t want them prying into what she was doing at night.
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After a while, she made up a story about meeting some kids at one of the concerts at the Riverwalk. Her mother just nodded and said that’s nice. Then she claimed to meet friends at the new pie shop that opened up on main street, but she really just walked around by herself.
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January 13, 2025 at 9:35 PM
After a while, she made up a story about meeting some kids at one of the concerts at the Riverwalk. Her mother just nodded and said that’s nice. Then she claimed to meet friends at the new pie shop that opened up on main street, but she really just walked around by herself.
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Sarah started telling her parents she was going for a run at night so she’d have an excuse to go out. Even though she’d never been a runner, they didn’t seem surprised. It was like she didn’t really exist, they were so wrapped up in their own new lives.
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January 13, 2025 at 9:15 PM
Sarah started telling her parents she was going for a run at night so she’d have an excuse to go out. Even though she’d never been a runner, they didn’t seem surprised. It was like she didn’t really exist, they were so wrapped up in their own new lives.
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From the visitor’s center downtown, she got a historic walking tour brochure, and she began to learn the names of some of the houses. None of the houses in the suburb she was from had names. These all had histories, but the brochure focused on their architectural features.
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January 13, 2025 at 7:49 PM
From the visitor’s center downtown, she got a historic walking tour brochure, and she began to learn the names of some of the houses. None of the houses in the suburb she was from had names. These all had histories, but the brochure focused on their architectural features.
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